warrrrrrrrrrrrr

i wanna restructure war somehow

its definitely longer than it needs to be (as is)

the structure right now is:
intro
verse
prechorus
verse
prechorus
chorus
instrumental section
prechorus
chorus x3

it seems kinda over dominated by chorus/prechorus (i.e. repetitive parts)

there are too many shitty songs about war protest and shit, so if we're gonna make one it has to be special. do these lyrics completely encapsulate your feelings on war? 2 verses and some catchy phrases? and why aren't you more pissed sounding? people are being killed.

war 5-24.m4a

i took the liberty of bastardizing the lyrics, directing it toward more of a "contempt for society" theme, and also making it more cheesy. i feel like the music is already cheesy in a kinda good way, so i figure why not acknowledge it and run with it, rather than trying to be serious, which can get boring fast.

my performances are terrible and the lyrics aren't "done". some of the parts i did will have to come from fred. i think this will be a good song to trade off between different voices.

here are the lyrics in case they're a little unintelligible:

did you see on the news today?
BLOOD! LIES! but first here's the weather:
"you guys are really gonna wanna wear your raincoats today! hawhawhaw!"
the method of the madness mesmerizing

in a world owned by a dollar, in a dream in someone's head
when i wake its just as dark as when they put myself to bed
"better not to worry too much and accept what can't be changed,
just close your eyes, desensitize, believe the lies, and play the game"

i've never been a very good sport

send my brothers to death, send my country to hell
tell me it'll be okay
lie to me, show me the way

melted down and poured out, the die-cast children are born
magnetized by the second their little feet touch the floor

"a master race of cybernetic harbingers would be a fine change of pace in this reporter's opinion
hahaha, back to you terry..."

a cultureless wasteland, everyone's cold
medication's the answer, everyone's sold
all are rejected with hearts full of holes
your god is your gold

attempt of war is up. change shit before i add more to it. or don't change it, which is fine by me/change it and i'll ask you to change it back later.

can you just change it and change it back for me

raw!!